That took a while.
Then again, it was worth the wait.
A bit short - but otherwise good effort. Still, kudos for hand-animating everything. I know how hard that is.
Thanks! And yeah im not too quick with animating by hand yet, i dont know how other people manage to do 8 mimute animations
Smooth. The facial expressions that change on the fly are great, the voice acting is top-tier.
What you could do is add some cruise controls and an ending scene. Keep up the good work!
PS: HOW MUCH GOOP HAS SHE GOT STASHED IN THERE?
Now this, this is good.
So, review time. Lets took at the good stuff...
+ KILL LA KILL. 'nuff said. You know what you're doing - making hentai of popera anime is always a good formula.
+ Quality voice sampling, very good use of lines.
+ Her hat had my sides in orbit. You get an extra star just for that.
... and for the bad stuff.
- This flash is around 21Mb. You could use a bit of quantum compression and cleanup.
- Compared to a 21Mb file, the animations on this are still somewhat jerky. Improvements from the demo, yes - but still jerky. A real offender would be BJ#2. I recommend you research up on "easing" in animations.
- Not enough voicing; just a few samples and repetitive moans. You should 'research' your character a bit more during your auditions.
Overall 4.0 stars, including effort.
Do better next time, alright? I'm looking forward to more of your releases.
Thanks for the great review. :D I agree I should learn to compress better, I'm not used to have to worry about that aspect yet. I'm working on something new and I'm hoping I can get better on the animation front as well. A lot of the art assets for this one were done a while ago and I feel like I could do better now.
As for the lines, believe it or not, I actually went through the entire anime to find decent sounding sounds for her. Since a lot of her audio is playing during parts where music is playing I was not able to use those. I even had to cut up some her dialogue so that I can use it as moans!
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.... what? That's it?
It is a .exe game so if you follow them steps then you can play it
Aside from a little repetitiveness here and there, you're doin' great. Don't worry - you've got some good pacing skills. Don't let early installment weirdness put you off making music. Do your best as always!
Thanks! I'm about to upload a new song sometime soon too
It's pretty soothing and comfy. Nice job!
Boring? I think not.
It's pretty good, actually.
I did that only to make you guys listen, lol.
But as you make a comment on it, I thank you for this. :)
Its not over yet. They're still planning on banning encryption.
Hopefully a few Tories see through her totalitarianism.
UK is #27 on my annexation list - pretty low priority, so enjoy the festivities! Also Scots need a bottle of whisky in hand.
I'd prefer you as Prime Minister to TM, honestly.
Looks more like a case of alien seafood infestation to me, Herr Doktor.
No medicine will cure this...
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