+3 Excellent animation.
+2 Superb audio.
-1 Too short.
0.5 Spengbab and Patricks's art style looks place-holdery. If intentional, disregard this part.
Thanks for the feedback!
Well done! Your skills just keep improving every damn time- It's pretty nice to see!
That took a while.
Then again, it was worth the wait.
Now this, this is good.
So, review time. Lets took at the good stuff...
+ KILL LA KILL. 'nuff said. You know what you're doing - making hentai of popera anime is always a good formula.
+ Quality voice sampling, very good use of lines.
+ Her hat had my sides in orbit. You get an extra star just for that.
... and for the bad stuff.
- This flash is around 21Mb. You could use a bit of quantum compression and cleanup.
- Compared to a 21Mb file, the animations on this are still somewhat jerky. Improvements from the demo, yes - but still jerky. A real offender would be BJ#2. I recommend you research up on "easing" in animations.
- Not enough voicing; just a few samples and repetitive moans. You should 'research' your character a bit more during your auditions.
Overall 4.0 stars, including effort.
Do better next time, alright? I'm looking forward to more of your releases.
Thanks for the great review. :D I agree I should learn to compress better, I'm not used to have to worry about that aspect yet. I'm working on something new and I'm hoping I can get better on the animation front as well. A lot of the art assets for this one were done a while ago and I feel like I could do better now.
As for the lines, believe it or not, I actually went through the entire anime to find decent sounding sounds for her. Since a lot of her audio is playing during parts where music is playing I was not able to use those. I even had to cut up some her dialogue so that I can use it as moans!
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.... what? That's it?
It is a .exe game so if you follow them steps then you can play it
Aside from a little repetitiveness here and there, you're doin' great. Don't worry - you've got some good pacing skills. Don't let early installment weirdness put you off making music. Do your best as always!
Thanks! I'm about to upload a new song sometime soon too
It's pretty soothing and comfy. Nice job!
Boring? I think not.
It's pretty good, actually.
I did that only to make you guys listen, lol.
But as you make a comment on it, I thank you for this. :)
"Well, we laid a strip for the Jersey Shore
Prepared to cross the line
I could see the bridge was lined with bears
But I didn't have a doggone dime
I says, Pig Pen this here's the Rubber Duck
We just ain't a gonna pay no toll
So we crashed the gate doin' 98
I says let them truckers roll Ten-Four"
Calculating to today's inflation rates and traffic, thats enough toll for about a week.
And that's why you should have diplomatic immunity, travel in a convoy of military vehicles staffed by bodyguard babes with guns.
At least they let him wear his 'bandito' eyemask in jail, right?
The mask is part of his face :o
Looking good, but don't forget #17: Break into Area 51.
#18: Let Trump's wall hit you on the way out
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