A bit short - but otherwise good effort. Still, kudos for hand-animating everything. I know how hard that is.
Thanks! And yeah im not too quick with animating by hand yet, i dont know how other people manage to do 8 mimute animations
Smooth. The facial expressions that change on the fly are great, the voice acting is top-tier.
What you could do is add some cruise controls and an ending scene. Keep up the good work!
PS: HOW MUCH GOOP HAS SHE GOT STASHED IN THERE?
Use this instead. Oh, and see you in 3 years.
Now this, this is good.
So, review time. Lets took at the good stuff...
+ KILL LA KILL. 'nuff said. You know what you're doing - making hentai of popera anime is always a good formula.
+ Quality voice sampling, very good use of lines.
+ Her hat had my sides in orbit. You get an extra star just for that.
... and for the bad stuff.
- This flash is around 21Mb. You could use a bit of quantum compression and cleanup.
- Compared to a 21Mb file, the animations on this are still somewhat jerky. Improvements from the demo, yes - but still jerky. A real offender would be BJ#2. I recommend you research up on "easing" in animations.
- Not enough voicing; just a few samples and repetitive moans. You should 'research' your character a bit more during your auditions.
Overall 4.0 stars, including effort.
Do better next time, alright? I'm looking forward to more of your releases.
Thanks for the great review. :D I agree I should learn to compress better, I'm not used to have to worry about that aspect yet. I'm working on something new and I'm hoping I can get better on the animation front as well. A lot of the art assets for this one were done a while ago and I feel like I could do better now.
As for the lines, believe it or not, I actually went through the entire anime to find decent sounding sounds for her. Since a lot of her audio is playing during parts where music is playing I was not able to use those. I even had to cut up some her dialogue so that I can use it as moans!
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.... what? That's it?
It is a .exe game so if you follow them steps then you can play it
Aside from a little repetitiveness here and there, you're doin' great. Don't worry - you've got some good pacing skills. Don't let early installment weirdness put you off making music. Do your best as always!
Thanks! I'm about to upload a new song sometime soon too
It's pretty soothing and comfy. Nice job!
Boring? I think not.
It's pretty good, actually.
I did that only to make you guys listen, lol.
But as you make a comment on it, I thank you for this. :)
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Hmm...tell me more.
The picture is slipping. The white bands are showing.
It sure is pretty, but the slip ups are there. Keep working on 'em!
Thanks for taking the time to view my work
This is top-tier, front-page material right here. I'll give you 100 stars.
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