Yomuchan's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[border crossing]

This is absolute bullshit.

WHY. WHY IS THIS GAME NOT ON THE FRONT PAGE?! WHY?! WHY!?!? WHYYYYYYY!?!?!?!

THIS IS LITERAL GOTY MATERIAL.

[Punch The Trump]

Now this, this is good.

[Business Simulator]

To Download

Either buy a Humble code over at our website, email us over at [e-mail] with reasons why you want a free key!

Visit the store

.... what? That's it?

BenjiPlaysYT responds:

It is a .exe game so if you follow them steps then you can play it

[Simple Fighting Game]

Say, this is... surprisingly good. You'll need to put in a background, some variance in the sound effects and some background music, though.

Keep on improving your skills, allright? Looking forward to seeing what you can do.

[Deceiving World]

Junk. Junk. Shovelware. Adpile. Junk. Doesn't load properly. Ju-

Wha-hey! That's pretty good!
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+Easy to listen music
++ Responsive controls
++ Really interesting game concept

- Some animations are off, and there's no clear indication of whether you succeeded or not.
- Music does not loop, facilitating the need to end the level.

Overall - 4.5 stars. Nice work!

[White Knight Fury]

Pros
+A shoutout one of my favorite super famicom games.
+Very stable area physics.
+A real challenge, especially later on.
+Loved the music.

Neutrals
* Music sometimes would feel hissy (in the opening cutscene), taking away from the super famicom feel.

Cons
- As enemy appearances increase, the controls become somewhat harder to handle.

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Overall - 4.5 stars. Well done, but you have room to improve. Good luck!

MinorAtrocityGames responds:

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wanted to polish it up, but life happened...

[TheFactory]

Use the dump for this sorta stuff, man.

http://www.newgrounds.com/dump

hypnopunch responds:

I'll keep that in mind

[Weapon Regulator]

"Nothing is true, everything is permitted"

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Weapons conventions are rules that the weak try to enforce to prevent getting overrun. However, as the march of technology moves ever forward, these rules become obsolete very fast.

Pretty great game! Deserves all the 5 stars.

[Riddle Transfer 2!]

HA! You got me.

Pretty slick-looking front, I figure. Good luck!

[Knights & Magic]

Strong points: It didn't crash my flash. 1+ star right there. Good job.

The concept is okay, actually. It's a good take on a popular board game.

Flaws: People don't often like to register/give emails to play games. In the future, you should drop that feature and allow people to play direct. While I understand that you wish to create a large-scale multiplayer game, this is not how you should pull it off.

Some units (here's lookin' at you, archers) are overpowered, and can pack on the hurt for a newbie cornered by a more experienced player. Try to even the playing board a bit. Think of a rock-paper-scissors thing instead of unbalanced game-play.

The synching with other players seem to be rather buggy. Sometimes, both players can get stuck in an infinite loop of 'waiting for other player'(noticed this happens a lot in guest mode). You should create a 'play alone' option first, then build on that. That way, you have a stronger foundation for the whole game.

Well, that's that. You seem to have a talent for making games; I hope you learn from your mistakes and continuously improve on your product. Good luck!

bnpla responds:

didn't you saw the "PLAY AS GUEST" button?... and the registration is only needed if you want to persist your progress (wins, losses...) else, just play as guest.