That's a nice kitchen. Did you model it off your own?
That's a nice kitchen. Did you model it off your own?
Maybe you should learn how to tween things instead of frame-by-frame animations. I could make something like this in 30 minutes.
Yeah I get that,I'm a noob really... haha.
Constructive criticism, you say? Allright.
Pros
++ Custom spriting. Everyone loves custom spriting.
+ The music was not annoying. This is important.
+ Environment damage. You could have done better, but you did well for your first flash.
Cons
- Reused dialog. It gets boring. Don't use it.
- Walking animation does not fit a 'dodge move'.
-- You need to enhance your VFX skills. Those static images looked lazy.
Well done. I look forward to you movies as you improve your skills.
The voice acting seems a bit stiff at points, but you've got a great idea going on here.
But overall, you've done some good stuff.
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I got all that.
I'm glad one of us did.
Happy birthday. :P
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You had a great idea, and the animation was pretty good too. The sounds were balanced and the gun vfx were done very nicely.
The reason why it gets a 3.5 average, is because its too short. Work on improving the girth of your storylines and stuff in more action and you'se gonna be a winner. Don't just say you're not a professional and leave it like that.
Good luck in the future!
Thanks. :P
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Wow!I never thought I could hear anyone tell me that.
I thought it was horrible so I made it shorter.Also,my birthday was today so I had to make it shorter.Thanks for the advice!
Its not quite as well done as stuff before - but eh, don't worry. This is your thing. You do what you damn well please.
Looking forward to moar stuff from ya.
Ssssssuperb. The animation is smooth, well-timed and the voice acting feels natural.
This is how a practice animation should be done.
Thanks master QwQ
Nicely done. The animations were smooth, and the backgrounds had Krinkels in a box. At least one of them, I think.
Tests are usually best put on the dump, then shared for feedback on animation threads, but since you asked for feedback... let's go.
+ Good quality sounds
+ Smooth animation
+ Has some variation of weapons and events, unlike most tests.
- No variation in gun sounds - try to make small changes to pitch and speed of gunfire sounds to enrich the scene.
Final verdict: Pretty good! I say you go make a full madness movie right now!
Thank you very much, i will try...
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