Yomuchan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Dragon Birthday]

Happy birthday!

Say, what's that audio on the end?

Sonicyay2 responds:

Ayumi Namasaki - Evolution (Time is Pop Remix)

[I'm A Animator]

My system's extremely stable. Are you sure you're running on a good environment?

Also, you really need to put some sound in these things.

8BitJam responds:

1gb motion compiting tablet and using flash 2004 totaly stable

[Fancy Pants does a Falcon Punch]

Animation was really choppy. You should have tried to make a flipbook animation.
The sound quality was very good, though.
Keep on improving your works, allright?

Kenji195 responds:

I keep thinking about a flipbook animations too, but I have bad camera so :P
But thanks a lot for reviewing, makes me happy so much :D

[An Extremely Short Chase]

Maybe you should learn how to tween things instead of frame-by-frame animations. I could make something like this in 30 minutes.

rash12 responds:

Yeah I get that,I'm a noob really... haha.

[Fore Twanty]

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude.

I got all that.

RubberDildo responds:

I'm glad one of us did.

[Incident:000A]

Happy birthday. :P

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You had a great idea, and the animation was pretty good too. The sounds were balanced and the gun vfx were done very nicely.

The reason why it gets a 3.5 average, is because its too short. Work on improving the girth of your storylines and stuff in more action and you'se gonna be a winner. Don't just say you're not a professional and leave it like that.

Good luck in the future!

Connectionsucks responds:

Thanks. :P
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Wow!I never thought I could hear anyone tell me that.
I thought it was horrible so I made it shorter.Also,my birthday was today so I had to make it shorter.Thanks for the advice!

[Azuki's Practice]

Ssssssuperb. The animation is smooth, well-timed and the voice acting feels natural.

This is how a practice animation should be done.

dominiichan responds:

Thanks master QwQ

[Madness Random: Practice]

Tests are usually best put on the dump, then shared for feedback on animation threads, but since you asked for feedback... let's go.

+ Good quality sounds
+ Smooth animation
+ Has some variation of weapons and events, unlike most tests.

- No variation in gun sounds - try to make small changes to pitch and speed of gunfire sounds to enrich the scene.

Final verdict: Pretty good! I say you go make a full madness movie right now!

Mr-Riot-NG responds:

Thank you very much, i will try...

[Zelda Cartoon Intro]

You get a lot of points for actually making me laugh.

Allright, lets go.
+ Good audio quality
+ Using flash
+ No extensive credits rolls for such a short movie

- Non-optimal sprite usage. You need to learn basic lipsynching.
- Somewhat low frames per second. I recommend at least 30 for movies like this+

I look forward to what more you can do, especially at your own pace.

Andyfritter responds:

Thank You so Much! and I know the FPS is low, my teacher hardly knows anything about what she teaches, so she demanded it be 24 fps. Sorry about that. And for the sprites, I was pressed for time so lipsynching is something I really want to learn but just didnt worry about for this project.

But Thankyou Thankyou Thankyou for sharing your knowledge.

[HTMFNaF2NSA]

AHHAHHAHHAHHAAHAHHA

You got me. You got me good.

Nice job. You really know how to pull the funpunches.

Sonicyay2 responds:

Outside: Thanks!
Inside: .....the heck is a funpunch?