Yomuchan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Name Isn't Spongef**k!]

That's a nice kitchen. Did you model it off your own?

[An Extremely Short Chase]

Maybe you should learn how to tween things instead of frame-by-frame animations. I could make something like this in 30 minutes.

rash12 responds:

Yeah I get that,I'm a noob really... haha.

[Mario vs. Geno]

Constructive criticism, you say? Allright.

Pros
++ Custom spriting. Everyone loves custom spriting.
+ The music was not annoying. This is important.
+ Environment damage. You could have done better, but you did well for your first flash.

Cons
- Reused dialog. It gets boring. Don't use it.
- Walking animation does not fit a 'dodge move'.
-- You need to enhance your VFX skills. Those static images looked lazy.

Well done. I look forward to you movies as you improve your skills.

[Wacky Brothers - Yardsale]

The voice acting seems a bit stiff at points, but you've got a great idea going on here.

But overall, you've done some good stuff.

[Fore Twanty]

Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuude.

I got all that.

RubberDildo responds:

I'm glad one of us did.

[Incident:000A]

Happy birthday. :P

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You had a great idea, and the animation was pretty good too. The sounds were balanced and the gun vfx were done very nicely.

The reason why it gets a 3.5 average, is because its too short. Work on improving the girth of your storylines and stuff in more action and you'se gonna be a winner. Don't just say you're not a professional and leave it like that.

Good luck in the future!

Connectionsucks responds:

Thanks. :P
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Wow!I never thought I could hear anyone tell me that.
I thought it was horrible so I made it shorter.Also,my birthday was today so I had to make it shorter.Thanks for the advice!

[Link's Quest for Zelda]

Its not quite as well done as stuff before - but eh, don't worry. This is your thing. You do what you damn well please.

Looking forward to moar stuff from ya.

[Azuki's Practice]

Ssssssuperb. The animation is smooth, well-timed and the voice acting feels natural.

This is how a practice animation should be done.

dominiichan responds:

Thanks master QwQ

[Madness Easter (Collab)]

Nicely done. The animations were smooth, and the backgrounds had Krinkels in a box. At least one of them, I think.

[Madness Random: Practice]

Tests are usually best put on the dump, then shared for feedback on animation threads, but since you asked for feedback... let's go.

+ Good quality sounds
+ Smooth animation
+ Has some variation of weapons and events, unlike most tests.

- No variation in gun sounds - try to make small changes to pitch and speed of gunfire sounds to enrich the scene.

Final verdict: Pretty good! I say you go make a full madness movie right now!

Mr-Riot-NG responds:

Thank you very much, i will try...